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RUGBY LEAGUE
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Introduction
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My sister Chloe, dad and I went to Canterbury park. It was a Saturday morning. We went to the park because I was Referee a rugby league game.
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When we got to Canterbury park I went to my field the field was wet and cold. I did my warm ups,the warm ups i needed to do was but kicks and high neas.
Then I put clothes .The top is green and white the pants are black and my top and pant where warm too.
The game was fun but some kids wore swearing at me. What I thort about the kids were they needed to learn some respect. The kids were tackling the other team. I thort the kids were going to tackle me over.
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Conclusion
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-what you think
-whether or not you would do it again.
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I felt happy because i did a good job of Referee.
I think that the game was very good because know one got hort.
I would all whase love to do it again because I had so much fun
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I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday 22 June 2018
RUGBY LEAGUE
Hi i am going to tell you about my holiday and I had so much fun and If you do want to comment please comment something
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