Monday, 1 May 2017
Makenzie's holiday
On the holiday I went to Nelson with my big sister Brooke. First we want to the hotel. And we want to Brookes dad's house he met me. He is very nice the next day we went to the, pool’s there was a hot pool there. There was free breakfast. And we did go karts we had a very very very good three day stay in Nelson, I wish I could live in Nelson for ever. and on the Sunday it was my sister’s birthday she is 12 but my family went horse riding. I loved my holiday. I hope you guys love my holiday story to. And enjoy.
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Dear Makenzie I like you holidays but you need to see if it makes seance because when I was reading it one sentence did not make seance. I like it.
ReplyDeletethank you and i will see
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