W.A.L.T Write an information report that informs the audience.
Success Criteria
I know I will be successful when….
- I use an opening statement that explains the subject of the report.
- The opening statement is followed by sentences that describe the event; what you saw, what you did, how you felt, what you learnt.
- Each paragraph focuses on a different aspect of the topic; travelling, the beach, the lagoon walk, playground.
- A general statement about the topic usually rounds off the report.
Magical Park
Last Friday room’s 1,2,3,10,11 went to Spencer park. We had food then we got to play and then we went on an adventure it was cool. Next we went on the beach. later we went back to eat lunch then we got to play again it was cool then we went back to School. It was the awesomest day of my life. And I was really really tired then I had to keep going. We saw birds on the walk. My feet were really sore and tired. I learnt horses can poo when they walk. When I was going back to school I wanted to go to sleep.
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.